Monday, 27 August 2018
Explanation Writing - How to stay healthy
Explanation writing: Explain ways in which we can keep healthy.
Introduction: Keeping Healthy
I will be explaining four ways to stay healthy and keep healthy.
Paragraph 1: Keeping Active
First…. If you want to stay healthy, make sure you always exercise.
You can go for a jog or run in the morning if you you want to.
If you like sports, then go outside and play netball, rugby, cricket, softball, with your friends or your siblings.
So make sure you always stay active.
Paragraph 2: Stop Smoking
Second…. If you smoke, then stop right now.
Smoking will cause lung diseases.
And smoking will give you cancer.
If you think smoking will make you feel better if you stress, then your wrong.
Maybe you could ask your doctor or a friend for help.
Paragraph 3: Eating healthy food.
Third…. If you want to be healthy, you have to eat healthy food.
Like Apples, Oranges, Pears, Kiwi Fruits, and vegetables.
And always stay hydrated.
So if you want to stay healthy, then start eating eating healthy food.
Paragraph 4: Don’t stress too much.
If you got some problems at home, then don’t stress.
You can meditate for a few minutes to calm your stress.
Or maybe you can do Tai Chi to calm you down.
Breath in and out deeply 10 times.
Talk to your friend about it.
Conclusion:
So….. those are the 4 ways you can stay healthy and keep healthy.
Share it with a buddy.
Get them to go through your writing and edit it.
Check for correct use of punctuation
Capital letters
Does it make sense?
Leave positive and constructive comments
Answer the following questions:
What is this explanation about?
How to stay healthy
What is the main point in paragraph one?
The main point in the first paragraph is about keeping active.
What is the main point in paragraph two?
The main point in paragraph two is about stop smoking.
What is the main point in paragraph three?
The main point in paragraph three is about eating healthy food.
What is the main point in paragraph four?
The main point for the fourth paragraph is about not stressing.
Punctuation
What is a period and when does it get used?
A period is used at the end of a sentence.
Showing that it is a full sentence.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a period.
I like eating oranges.
I go to P.E.S.
I love playing rugby.
What is a question mark and when does it get used?
A question mark is used in writing to indicate where questions are asked.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a question mark.
What year were you born?
This work is suppose to due today (?).
Where do you come from?
What is a quotation mark and when does it get used?
Quotation mark is another word for speech marks and if you see these marks then you will know that someone is speaking or talking.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a quotation mark.
“Are you playing rugby on Friday?’’
“Anyone who has never make a mistake has never tried anything new” - Albert Einstein.
“I hate playing cricket”, said Harold.
What is a apostrophe and when does it get used?
Apostrophe are used to indicate possession, if something belongs to someone.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a apostrophe.
This is Miss Tuia’s classroom.
I haven’t played softball for ages.
I don’t think I can do it.
What is a comma and when does it get used?
Comma is a pause between parts of a sentence or separating items in a list.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a comma.
My favourite sports are rugby, netball, soccer, and football.
When I was running to school, I heard the bell ring.
I like reading Smile, Drama, and Sisters by Raina Telgemeier
What is a hyphen and when does it get used?
Hyphen is a mark that you can use to join words or adjective.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a hyphen.
He is a two-year-old girl.
The answer for your maths work is in between 60-70.
It was only a five-minute wait.
What is a exclamation point and when does it get used?
Exclamation point are used to give command and show very strong emotion
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a exclamation point.
Do your work!
I am so happy to play rugby!
Go to Mr. Burt!
What is a colon and when does it get used?
Colons are used to introduce a list.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a colon.
I need the following items: school uniform, school jacket, and a packback.
She worked really hard to go to lunch time : She earned it.
We need the following item: Ham, chicken, bread, and butter.
What is a parentheses and when does it get used?
Parentheses is another word for brackets. Parentheses are used to put around extra information that is too important to be left out.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a parentheses.
John (the boy from the rugby team) is good at rugby.
Tracy( the girl who lives in a red house) is going to play netball this term.
Portia Woodman ( the girl in the Black Ferns Sevens Team) is good at stepping.
What is a semicolon and when does it get used?
A semicolon is typically between two main clauses, that is more pronounced than that indicated by a comma.
WALT: use punctuation in our writing
A period is used at the end of a sentence.
Showing that it is a full sentence.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a period.
I like eating oranges.
I go to P.E.S.
I love playing rugby.
What is a question mark and when does it get used?
A question mark is used in writing to indicate where questions are asked.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a question mark.
What year were you born?
This work is suppose to due today (?).
Where do you come from?
What is a quotation mark and when does it get used?
Quotation mark is another word for speech marks and if you see these marks then you will know that someone is speaking or talking.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a quotation mark.
“Are you playing rugby on Friday?’’
“Anyone who has never make a mistake has never tried anything new” - Albert Einstein.
“I hate playing cricket”, said Harold.
What is a apostrophe and when does it get used?
Apostrophe are used to indicate possession, if something belongs to someone.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a apostrophe.
This is Miss Tuia’s classroom.
I haven’t played softball for ages.
I don’t think I can do it.
What is a comma and when does it get used?
Comma is a pause between parts of a sentence or separating items in a list.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a comma.
My favourite sports are rugby, netball, soccer, and football.
When I was running to school, I heard the bell ring.
I like reading Smile, Drama, and Sisters by Raina Telgemeier
What is a hyphen and when does it get used?
Hyphen is a mark that you can use to join words or adjective.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a hyphen.
He is a two-year-old girl.
The answer for your maths work is in between 60-70.
It was only a five-minute wait.
What is a exclamation point and when does it get used?
Exclamation point are used to give command and show very strong emotion
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a exclamation point.
Do your work!
I am so happy to play rugby!
Go to Mr. Burt!
What is a colon and when does it get used?
Colons are used to introduce a list.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a colon.
I need the following items: school uniform, school jacket, and a packback.
She worked really hard to go to lunch time : She earned it.
We need the following item: Ham, chicken, bread, and butter.
What is a parentheses and when does it get used?
Parentheses is another word for brackets. Parentheses are used to put around extra information that is too important to be left out.
Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a parentheses.
John (the boy from the rugby team) is good at rugby.
Tracy( the girl who lives in a red house) is going to play netball this term.
Portia Woodman ( the girl in the Black Ferns Sevens Team) is good at stepping.
What is a semicolon and when does it get used?
A semicolon is typically between two main clauses, that is more pronounced than that indicated by a comma.
WALT: use punctuation in our writing
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