This blog is a record of my learning from Pt England School in Auckland, through to Tamaki College.
Monday, 27 August 2018
Explanation Writing - How to stay healthy
Explanation writing: Explain ways in which we can keep healthy.
Introduction: Keeping Healthy
I will be explaining four ways to stay healthy and keep healthy.
Paragraph 1: Keeping Active
First…. If you want to stay healthy, make sure you always exercise.
You can go for a jog or run in the morning if you you want to.
If you like sports, then go outside and play netball, rugby, cricket, softball, with your friends or your siblings.
So make sure you always stay active.
Paragraph 2: Stop Smoking
Second…. If you smoke, then stop right now.
Smoking will cause lung diseases.
And smoking will give you cancer.
If you think smoking will make you feel better if you stress, then your wrong.
Maybe you could ask your doctor or a friend for help.
Paragraph 3: Eating healthy food.
Third…. If you want to be healthy, you have to eat healthy food.
Like Apples, Oranges, Pears, Kiwi Fruits, and vegetables.
And always stay hydrated.
So if you want to stay healthy, then start eating eating healthy food.
Paragraph 4: Don’t stress too much.
If you got some problems at home, then don’t stress.
You can meditate for a few minutes to calm your stress.
Or maybe you can do Tai Chi to calm you down.
Breath in and out deeply 10 times.
Talk to your friend about it.
Conclusion:
So….. those are the 4 ways you can stay healthy and keep healthy.
Share it with a buddy.
Get them to go through your writing and edit it.
Check for correct use of punctuation
Capital letters
Does it make sense?
Leave positive and constructive comments
Answer the following questions:
What is this explanation about?
How to stay healthy
What is the main point in paragraph one?
The main point in the first paragraph is about keeping active.
What is the main point in paragraph two?
The main point in paragraph two is about stop smoking.
What is the main point in paragraph three?
The main point in paragraph three is about eating healthy food.
What is the main point in paragraph four?
The main point for the fourth paragraph is about not stressing.
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